I received a free copy of the ebook Roller Coaster in Tehran to review
This book starts out really good. We're introduced to the main character during a tense moment and it's easy to be drawn in and want to keep reading. There's some flowery, "Mary Sue" language used early on, but not too bad. The chapters are really long, though, and can sometimes seem to drag on. About three chapters in things take a sudden and abrupt nose dive and the author just can't recover from the death spiral this book finds itself in. The main character's entire personality suddenly makes a dramatic shift and she becomes a completely different person. She goes from being a nervous, flighty girl to being a sex-crazed fiend. The story has potential to be good, but it misses the mark the further in you read. With a little work, the author could have a great book on his hands, but as it sets the book really isn't worth reading.
This book starts out really good. We're introduced to the main character during a tense moment and it's easy to be drawn in and want to keep reading. There's some flowery, "Mary Sue" language used early on, but not too bad. The chapters are really long, though, and can sometimes seem to drag on. About three chapters in things take a sudden and abrupt nose dive and the author just can't recover from the death spiral this book finds itself in. The main character's entire personality suddenly makes a dramatic shift and she becomes a completely different person. She goes from being a nervous, flighty girl to being a sex-crazed fiend. The story has potential to be good, but it misses the mark the further in you read. With a little work, the author could have a great book on his hands, but as it sets the book really isn't worth reading.
No comments:
Post a Comment
Please leave a message after the beep... *BEEP*